footmen
Why, if I may ask? What purpose do they serve?
RH/4R
RH?
Normally the language would've settled the age question, but this was a Bavarian going by the accent. There wasn't much to expect in the way of proper speech.
Accent? If I understand correctly, he is speaking german, right? So he would not have an accent, maybe a dialect.
Also, why that dismissal of bavarian capability for proper speech?
"Boy," Salz's hand moved to the collar of his overcoat, pulling it back just enough to display the symbol tattooed on the side of his neck. "Are you pure of heart?"
Is that meant to imply that Salz has the 4R-symbol tatooed on his neck? In a normally visible fashion? The Fourth Reich takes great pains to ensure that their symbol cannot be seen by the naked eye unless anomalous means are taken. They usually do their best to keep a low profile.
Also, I have to question the validity of openly asking what is a kinda obivous phrase to recognize one another. If that was a member of the Fourth Reich, even f in the area on other matters, Salz would have been informed to prevent misunderstandings?
Also, the use of a codephrase to recognize allies is something that would not be needed in an organisation as small as 4R (usually) is, which brings me back to the question of why add footmen. Thereby making such things (which, if used on a foudation agent could lead to discovery of their current activities) necessary.
His Snitch and Witness, those wretched surveillance unterdaemons he dragged everywhere, were perched in the far corner as lookout,
… Fels never summons demons. He neither has the necessary abilities to get them over to the mortal plane, nor does he have any desire to have any contact with demons. His forte are plants and animals and using his abilities to manipulate/change them.
Still, Acolyte Fels remained motionless. Was this his idea of self-perfection? Sitting in a cloud of burnt plants and dust? All he perfected was burning out his sense of smell. Salz clapped, and again, Fels remained still.
Fels is not a calm enough person to sit still and ignore it when someone interrupts him.
another faint rustle of leaves as Fels stood up
… is he wearing pants made out of leaves?
Acolyte Fels wasn't particularly tall at 165 cm
Where did you get that information from?
Need I remind you of Blitz?
Blitz wasn't a snitch, rather a deserter. He got fed up and simply left.
A sharp cough from Fels silenced the Snitch. "Acolyte Salz, if you will."
Am I getting this correctly: Whenever Salz gets angry, it becomes painful/harder to breath around him? Why would Rass tolerate someone who is a constant danger to everyone around?
THIS FAG BASHES BACK
In german there is no shorter version for that word, so if thats supposed to be written in german it would be correct to use the full word.
Fats Burg
That name sounds very fake to me, so the reveal that it is fake doesnt really hold much… anything, really.
