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hypodermic darts may be used
I'd add information on what these do. Do they contain deadly poison? An anesthetic? Explosives? Acid? [REDACTED]?
The herd entirely consists of females, among seven (7).
Here either a noun is missing (seven what?) or the structure of the sentence is wrong. Afaik the count of things belongs to the thing. Like in "The herd entirely consists of seven (7) females."
He was discovered that a plumbed suit prevents 009-FR-1 from teleporting nails in the body of the individual who carries it.
What is a "plumbed suit"? Lead-lined clothes? An armored suit? A biohazard-suit? General hazmat- or radioactive protection suit?
The rest of the translation is comprehensible.