SCP-ES-099

Summary:

Requesting review

SCP-ES-099

D-Stro 04 Feb 2018 05:57

Finally, I finished my second translation! Thank you guys from the hispanic branch c: and you too Rimple!

http://scp-int.wikidot.com/scp-es-099

I think it doesn't have any misspellings, I checked many times…

I would like to know what you think of it.

Re: SCP-ES-099

Golden506 31 Mar 2018 07:21

No misspellings, huh?
reads the first sentence

conisting of oak wood

I think you mean consisting.

The material that was used to write

I would replace "material" with "substance" and get rid of the "that was".

temporary amnesia that causes

I would replace "that causes" with "causing"

Those are all the errors I could see, and it's a relatively long article. Good job.